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This is my new OC
She is apart of the book I'm writing.
I'll give you the very first paragraph of my story
Looking into its stone cold eyes it lunges at me. I quickly roll to my left, towards the sledgehammer that lies on the ground. That damn beast knocked it out of my hand earlier with its tail and bruised my hand pretty bad. Grabbing the hammer, I see it coming at me with its sharp claws. I raised the sledge above my head and hastily bring it down. The vibration of the metal hitting concrete brought a sharp pain up my entire arm. I grimaced as the gargoyle gave a loud shriek and slammed into the floor. Seeing the pieces of the arm shatter on the ground I quickly ran to the creature and raised the hammer to smash its head. But before I’m able to make contact I feel a force knock the wind out of me. My vision is blurred and I taste the metallic blood in my mouth while I pick myself off the floor. I glanced at the sledge that lies on the floor once again and the stone beast gave a mighty roar. With its massive wings, it flew high up in the air and I took the opportunity to run to the hammer. In my peripheral I see it dive towards me. Its speed was incredible; it seems like as I picked up the hammer that it was only inches away from me. I close my eyes and swung the hammer with all the strength I could muster, hoping I made a connection. The throbbing in my whole body tells me that I definitely hit something. As I open my eyes I see the remnants of the skull that once belongs to the gargoyle and the body lying on the ground. I walk over to the flailing body and bring the sledgehammer up for one final blow to the chest. I watch as the rest of the body slowly crumbles apart leaving a pile of fine dust. I shift through the dust and I grab a small orb about the size of my palm. It’s the heart of the gargoyle and depending on the type, they’re heart are typically made of some type of mineral; this one happens to be marble. Placing the orb into my bag that is attached to my belt, I take one last glance at what’s left of the pathetic creature and I’m out the door. Knowing how gargoyles can instinctively locate their dead members, it’s usually not a safe idea to stay in the general area.
Critique on the story is welcome!
More pictures of her is on the way haha
She is apart of the book I'm writing.
I'll give you the very first paragraph of my story
Looking into its stone cold eyes it lunges at me. I quickly roll to my left, towards the sledgehammer that lies on the ground. That damn beast knocked it out of my hand earlier with its tail and bruised my hand pretty bad. Grabbing the hammer, I see it coming at me with its sharp claws. I raised the sledge above my head and hastily bring it down. The vibration of the metal hitting concrete brought a sharp pain up my entire arm. I grimaced as the gargoyle gave a loud shriek and slammed into the floor. Seeing the pieces of the arm shatter on the ground I quickly ran to the creature and raised the hammer to smash its head. But before I’m able to make contact I feel a force knock the wind out of me. My vision is blurred and I taste the metallic blood in my mouth while I pick myself off the floor. I glanced at the sledge that lies on the floor once again and the stone beast gave a mighty roar. With its massive wings, it flew high up in the air and I took the opportunity to run to the hammer. In my peripheral I see it dive towards me. Its speed was incredible; it seems like as I picked up the hammer that it was only inches away from me. I close my eyes and swung the hammer with all the strength I could muster, hoping I made a connection. The throbbing in my whole body tells me that I definitely hit something. As I open my eyes I see the remnants of the skull that once belongs to the gargoyle and the body lying on the ground. I walk over to the flailing body and bring the sledgehammer up for one final blow to the chest. I watch as the rest of the body slowly crumbles apart leaving a pile of fine dust. I shift through the dust and I grab a small orb about the size of my palm. It’s the heart of the gargoyle and depending on the type, they’re heart are typically made of some type of mineral; this one happens to be marble. Placing the orb into my bag that is attached to my belt, I take one last glance at what’s left of the pathetic creature and I’m out the door. Knowing how gargoyles can instinctively locate their dead members, it’s usually not a safe idea to stay in the general area.
Critique on the story is welcome!
More pictures of her is on the way haha
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Your character design is so great! She's got a unique design, and I love the hair and hoodie the most. I also like the glove-thing (dunno what it's called, sorry).
Your anatomy is great too, and so is your style, but her feet could be a little bit bigger. I love the way you drew her body figure. The lineart is very neat compared to other traditional media.